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First Render

virusvirus Lurker
in Artwork Forum
Here it is, my first render.

[img]http://www.geocities.com/saitek_guy/Whitestar1.jpg[/img]

I would like some feedback, on the parts i should focus on.

Enjoy!

Comments

  • SanfamSanfam I like clocks.
    AAH! They're getting better! [img]http://forums.firstones.com/forums/smile.gif[/img]
    All of these "First" somethings just keep on getting better! [img]http://forums.firstones.com/forums/smile.gif[/img]
  • EternityEternity Elite Ranger
    Critical Approach:

    Hummmmmm Let's see. The lighting is wrong. IT is comming from teh front, not the rear as it should be. There is no way you could get a Whitestar rendered correctley first go. What do you use? (Ie Lightwave, MAX, Blender etc)


    Average Approach:

    Very good. Keep up the good work!
  • A2597A2597 Fanboy
    well,if thats blender he textured the Whitestar himself, but IMHO it looks more like Brice or Truespace. [img]http://forums.firstones.com/forums/smile.gif[/img]
    Nice pic, I agree the lighting should be in the back though. [img]http://forums.firstones.com/forums/smile.gif[/img]
    Overall, 100% better then my first pic! [img]http://forums.firstones.com/forums/smile.gif[/img]

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  • whitestar90whitestar90 Elite Ranger
    Change the lighting otherwise a brilliant first go [img]http://forums.firstones.com/forums/smile.gif[/img]
  • virusvirus Lurker
    Ok, Changed the light possition... and here we go [img]http://forums.firstones.com/forums/wink.gif[/img]

    [img]http://www.geocities.com/saitek_guy/Whitestar2.jpg[/img]

    Enjoy!

    PS. Still appreciating comments [img]http://forums.firstones.com/forums/wink.gif[/img]
  • [AGR]The_Raider[AGR]The_Raider Earthforce Officer
    Better. But maybe the nose shoul be a little more darker? i don't knwo...
    Which Proggie do u use?

    Raider the Bunny...
  • A2597A2597 Fanboy
    much better.
    now...get those lights on the wings, bridge, and nose on, and it will be PERFECT! [img]http://forums.firstones.com/forums/smile.gif[/img]

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  • JabuJabu Ranger
    Somehow that Whitestar looks like a plastic model [img]http://forums.firstones.com/forums/smile.gif[/img]

    Bryce? It sure looks like it's been done in Bryce.
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