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Dawn Patrol

A2597A2597 Fanboy
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Omega: Matt Tarling
Starfury: Mark Kane
PlanetMap: ME! [img]http://216.15.145.59/mainforums/smile.gif[/img]
[url="http://www.b5-blender.com/render/dawnpatrol.jpg"]http://www.b5-blender.com/render/dawnpatrol.jpg[/url]

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Comments

  • excaliburexcalibur Elite Ranger
    Very nice! Can you add an atmosphere to the planet?

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  • Alec MAlec M Award Winning Poster
    Very nice pic! Couple of things:

    - Looks like you're having a bit of trouble with the texture "Agamemnon" for the name of the ship, might want to clean that up a bit.

    - The EA insignia looks a bit purple, but maybe it's just me.

    - I would decrease the number of stars (in reality, anyone in orbit near the bright side of any planet wouldn't see ANY stars, since their light is too faint when compared with the planet's, or the star's). They also look too "fake" (uniform colour and brightness).

    I don't think an atmosphere is needed around the planet. It could be a gas giant after all. I'm definitly seeing an improvement in your work A2597, keep it up!

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  • BannerBanner Ranger
    Maybe making the star size a bit bigger and the intensity smaller?

    Otherwise I agree with Slade. Definete improvement!

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  • excaliburexcalibur Elite Ranger
    [quote]Originally posted by Slade:
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    - The EA insignia looks a bit purple, but maybe it's just me.[/b][/quote]

    The EA insignia always purple on that model for some reason.

    Also looks like you're missing some lights on the rotating section of the Omega too.


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  • A2597A2597 Fanboy
    According to Matt Tarling, they are all there. he approoved it with flying colors. I belive he called it "The best conversion I've even seen of her!"

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  • Ranger1Ranger1 Ranger
    Also the box around the A should not be there. Those only belong on the Novas. Besides the above mentioned good pic.
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